Superb plan overall. I thought Paul Gildings foreword was excellent, as was the structure and language of the overall plan. I believe he should talk up a little more about how it was a time that was well remembered, the feeling of purpose- worthy of it's own section perhaps. The buildings section was a little short for me; I think the part about the residential and commercial being 13% or so of emissions, but all of electricity generated (nearly) is routed to buildings residential or commercial.
Talk up the feeling of purpose during WWII Paul Gilding mentioned, and Buildings section
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